Invisible Sun
December 19, 2008

My humanity’s skin
Fits me.
I am its strengths
Its weaknesses.
From a childhood
Of secrets,
Being good,
Invisible, the good girl-
Comes this ability-
To see and hear,
To not be seen,
To be the observer.
Yet, in the hidden
Corners lies danger.
The soul risks slow submersion
When hidden in the dark.
When the good girl
Becomes the grounding,
The listener, the receiver,
Obscured from the light,
Death begins its
Slow creep.
Innocuously, like
Mitosis, splitting
The self from
Self, light, and air.
It is insidious and
It is death.
She becomes a secret.
She becomes the lie.
She becomes others lies.
She becomes invisible.
Turning towards the
Dungeon’s door,
The tearing of tectonic
Magnitude, she walks away,
Into the light.
kimsmith

Dancing in the Sunshine
Happy Christmas.
Greetings,
Sathiyan
Oh, thank you Sathiyan. Greetings to you fine eyed one.
Kim
good one friend…i like the consistent flow…thanks for a good poem….pls try increasing the font
pls it makes reading difficult…
-narendra
now the hard part..i gotto to do this..no other choice..forgive me…the advertising…lol
http://frozenwell.wordpress.com
narendra,
Oh my, I read “now the hard part”, and took a deep breath because I thought: critique. I can do this!
Please, always advertise your creativity!
Thank you for reading and your words.
I do need to fix the font situation, I have vision issues even, I should know better! Thanks you for writing that. Sometimes things are right in front of us.
I am now off to visit you!
Kim
thanks Kim,
actually i am new to this BLOGLAND…just a few weeks back..so i dont kno how ppl react when they find some strangers dropping in their links….i am not sure if watever i write is read by sombody at all….so i am trying to advertise this…:)
belive me i hate to do this…it ruins the fun…but then u need to travel places, if not to show urselfthat others are ther but to show others that you are there…haha..